What's New These Days....

What is L.A. to you?

To me, she is great and twisted; showing me horrors that I long after while alluding a life of the walking dead...

I am glad to report, I severed some of the tentacles that had hold of me since I left.
.That took way too long.



9.22.2010

Blogging/Writing Tips from Phlip

These are the notes I took during a phone call with a close friend and mentor. He wanted me to think about these things whenever I blog. I will certainly do that. However, when considering the advice, I believe the ideas he has suggested are helpful for all types of creation:


Be Direct.
Map out the story,
then build towards the end.

in your build up of the story,
*don't go for home run lines...*
Play small ball and
keep advancing the reader.

as you make your way
through the story,
take your readers with you;
help them walk beside you.

Do not alienate them;
speak in their terms,
in their language....
Don't use local colloquialisms
with a foreign audience.


Write for your audience;
Who is your audience?
Know your audience.

Write as if they know nothing about your topic.

Write for your audience;
Who is your audience?
Know your audience.



Ernest Hemingway was direct and simple in his writing,
yet he said so much.....


-Well put, Phlip.





What about you, any thoughts? 
Discussion helps everyone who reads this article. 
If you are like me, I expect his advice speaks deeply 
to any writers out there reading this.




Thank You, Phlip


ps-
What's my name?